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"Manifesto" by Critical Mass Roma

“Manifesto” by Critical Mass Roma

Of all the great benefits of living the rich, lengthy lives that we first-world denizens are blessed with, the greatest must surely be having the ability to cycle through multiple iterations of the self. It appears that, collectively, our reptilian brain still hasn’t quite caught up with this concept – research shows that people of all ages systematically underestimate the extent to which their future selves will change, despite ample evidence that their past selves underwent radical evolution throughout their lives. But personally, I’m a big fan of the idea. I take perverse pleasure in knowing how different my current self is from the self of my teens or early 20s, and I gleefully await the strange new person who will be looking back at my life ten years from now and smiling ruefully.

So, it’s no skin off my back to admit that a decade ago, I held a particular opinion about the world, and that opinion was that Cormack McCarthy was an annoying, conceited, terrible no good writer. It was a popular opinion at the time – in some circles, anyway. B.R. Myers had just released an entire manifesto dedicated to taking down a generation of mainstream literary darlings, from Annie Proulx to Don DeLillo, and he reserved special ire for McCarthy’s brand of “muscular,” “edgy” prose. I was in college then, taking an advanced creative writing course with a professor who hated McCarthy and assigned “A Reader’s Manifesto” as a de facto writing bible, and this was the kind of literary criticism I could get behind. In addition to its sneering acid tone, the essay advanced a tidy us-against-The-Literary-Establishment-Man argument  – all the hallmarks of a college student’s view of the universe.

Of course, I had never read anything by McCarthy at the time. But that didn’t stop me from singling him out for special abuse in my assigned response to “A Reader’s Manifesto.” While vigorously applauding Myers for his absolute ideological correctness on the subject of contemporary fiction, I believe I may have compared one of the snippets from All The Pretty Horses that Myers chose to eviscerate (“He said that the souls of horses mirror the souls of men more closely than men suppose and that horses also love war… Lastly he said that he had seen the souls of horses and that it was a terrible thing to see.”) to the “horse is like a man” Borat sketch. (Okay, I have to admit that was a pretty good zinger. Nice work, past Maryana.)

As I said, though, I’d never actually read any McCarthy, other than the quotes that Myers had plucked out for ridicule in his essay, nor did I stop to think how my beloved Faulkner would fare if cherry-picked and held under microscopic scrutiny by some priggish grammarian.

A few years later, I finally did pick up a copy of The Road from the desk of a fellow grad student who shared an office with me at Harvard and happened to be T.A.ing for James Wood’s Contemporary American Fiction course. I breezed through it in a few hours to stave off grading midterm exams and found it a moderately better use of grad school procrastination time than my usual forays into the depths of Google Reader. Later still, I saw the movie starring a disheveled Vigo Mortensen (clearly laying the ground work for Andrew Lincoln’s portrayal of Rick Grimes in The Walking Dead), and it’s hard now for me to separate the movie from the novel; both were equally engrossing and forgettable, sort of like Fight Club in the appearance of holding immeasurable weight for a brief glimmering instant, before disappearing into the ether.

However, to say that I was put off by the pompous prose or convoluted syntax would be a lie. It did hold a certain charm, an appropriately scrabbling, relentless cadence for end-of-the-world genre fiction, the kind B.R. Myers was okay with as long as it wasn’t endorsed by the Oprah Book Club.

It’s been a few years since I left the frosty academic bubble of Cambridge behind, but my inner grad student bubbled back up this morning when I followed a link to a blog post titled “Is Cormac McCarthy a Terrible Writer?” I read through the appraisals of McCarthy’s writing by vaunted literary scholars like the aforementioned James Wood, as well as those of ordinary readers, and I cringed – first at the literary scholars and their sad attempt to imitate the prose style of the subjects of their reviews (“When critics laud him for being biblical, they are hearing sounds that are more often than not merely antiquarian, a kind of vatic histrionic groping, in which the prose plumes itself up and flourishes an ostentatiously obsolete lexicon.” Ugh.) But I cringed even more at the ordinary readers’ comments:

Language structure is there to aid communication, it should not be modified willy nilly by some hack author as a literary device in a way to inject what he is unable to convey through language. In this case all you have is a clumsy, choppy, piece of sub-par writing.

McCarthy’s writing is full of incomplete sentences and anastrophe, completely lacks quotation marks, and frequently embeds dialogue in the middle of paragraphs… Each of these conventions is a barrier to straightforward reading…

It’s as if a century of literary innovation – generations of writers deciding to take wild, imaginative departures from established conventions – had simply never existed. I imagined a horrifyingly hilarious scenario: what if James Joyce or Virginia Woolf, or even Ernest Hemingway, had lived in the world of blogs and Amazon book reviews? What kinds of reader criticism would be lobbed at them? Terrible grammar? Archaic lexicon? Run-on sentences?

Sadness and indignation welled up in me reading those comments and feeling like those generations of writers clearly lost the game: all their brilliance and innovation sank like a stone, with barely a ripple across the smooth surface of reader expectation. Or to put it in the terms of one commenter who, like me, must have felt the ripple in various graduate-level courses and seminars, but can now only wail Cassandra-like at the uncaring masses: “Stick to John Grisham. THAT guy knows where to put an apostrophe.”

But the parting words of the post felt like vindication:

This is the reason I think debating “literary merit,” or ranking or rating books, quickly becomes an exercise in either folly, futility, or bullying. If you’re going to ask “but is it any good?” you need to flesh out the question: good at what? for what? for whom? There are myriad ways a novel can be. A much more interesting discussion will come from asking “what does McCarthy’s prose do?” or “what are the connections between McCarthy’s literary strategies and the central ideas of The Road?” then from asking if he is a good or a bad writer. Why would you even ask those questions, though, if you didn’t think the work was worth spending that kind of time and thought on? By assigning The Road to my class, I’ve implicitly endorsed it as good writing, haven’t I? And, to return to where I began, I think it is good writing. Good at what? Good for what? Well, one of the things it is unequivocally good at, or good for, is provoking discussions about good (or bad) writing.

Literary criticism has undoubtedly changed in the decade since “A Reader’s Manifesto.” Even in my brief tenure living among their tribe, I saw fewer academics issuing proscriptions like Harold Bloom or James Wood (or, for that matter, B.R. Myers) and more behaving with self-conscious restraint in their assessment of the literary canon. Instead of spilling ink to pontificate about what is Good and Right, they’d started asking questions like, “Good at what? Good for what?” Given how much people change in the brief course of their lives, it’s amazing how static the world of the arts has remained despite the centuries of shakeups and rebellions. It’s nice to see that even that entity is not immutable, and I suppose it shouldn’t be so surprising that its acolytes, standing on the cusp, are often too myopic to see it.

Moral exhibitionism versus political action

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Václav Havel by Zbigniew Kresowaty.

Of all the novels I read in college and grad school as a precocious bibliophile, The Unbearable Lightness of Being was the one that probably stuck the hardest to my ribs. It wasn’t my favorite novel or even one I necessarily think of when I’m rattling off a list of Great Works That Have Moved Me ™ when I want to sound smart and interesting to a stranger at a party. I think it’s because Kundera’s voice seems to have wormed its way into my ear, assimilating his ideas so seamlessly with my brain that I don’t even realize they’re his until moments like today, when I stop to think about why I am not a moral exhibitionist.

Unbearable Lightness is a War and Peace style blend of politics (it’s set around the time of the Prague Spring), love (but the tanks play second fiddle to Czech girls’ mini skirts), and philosophical rumination (Nietzsche’s theory of eternal return features prominently). There is a moment where Tomas is asked by a dissident to sign a petition to free some political prisoners – an act he rejects on a variety of grounds, primary among them the fact that dissidents seem to care more about being viewed as heroes by history than performing any pragmatic, altruistic action. 

The roots of this view, that protest and dissidence is primarily a self-aggrandizing, egotistical endeavor, trace back to an essayistic argument between Kundera and Vaclav Havel, basically the chief dissident of Czechoslovakia in the 1960s (and, later, friend of Frank Zappa and president of democratic Czechoslovakia). Havel insisted that after the Soviet takeover, political action on the part of those opposed to the Soviet regime was necessary, despite the seemingly hopeless situation the Czechs found themselves in. Kundera fired back that the political action Havel referred to had two aims: (1) to unmask the world in all its irreparable amorality, and (2) to display its author in all his pure morality. 

I have thought a lot about this debate over the years. Even before reading Kundera, I sympathized with his position; student protest, particularly around the start of the war in Iraq and Afghanistan during my first year of college, struck me as paltry and vain, in both senses. I couldn’t stomach the idea of one man or woman standing up in a crowd and declaring him or herself the arbiter of truth in a world of lies, not to mention myself in that role. Those who truly wanted the world to change, I reasoned, would do it within the system – cynically, deviously, hiding their true intentions and secretly chipping away at the foundations until one day the great granite face of the world suddenly resembled their personal vision of it. Expecting that great granite face to turn on its pedestal, stare at one lonely individual standing up with a placard in the middle of the freshman quad, and tremble and shatter from the power of the almighty truth seemed… well, downright silly.

At that age, like many of my peers, I had a blog (ages 16-21, Livejournal, no judgment), in which I recorded daily ruminations and impressionistic accounts culled from my rather conventionally lonely and troubled adolescence. My greatest enemies were the truism on one side and pretentiousness on the other, and stalwart effort went into maintaining a persona of ironic, aesthetic detachment. I was certainly no Kundera, but the gist was the same – I was Tomas, fallible and quixotic creature, and I wanted no part in putting my name on something permanent and declamatory.

Like all maxims, though, moral exhibitionism is easy to turn on its head. It’s hard to read Kundera’s essay on moral exhibitionism now without smiling sardonically at his own obsession not to sully his hands in the mundane dealings of politics and remain ideologically pure. After all, there is no better author on the subject of unmasking the immorality of the world than Kundera himself, who ruthlessly deconstructs the petty delusions of his characters with scene after scene of humiliation and hamartia. And few authors are better at maintaining their ironic distance from their subject matter, always twelve steps ahead of worldly ambition in a realm of pure aestheticism. It’s trite, but Kundera’s inaction was always just another kind of action, more rarefied and gnomic, but still speaking against some great granite monolith, still gleefully intended to cause certain fault-lines to tremble in the world.

These days, the pressure to maintain some kind of distinction between the one kind of moral speech and the other seems less important to me. Exhibitionism is only a matter of degree, and to aim for the opposite extremely, terrified secrecy, feels equally selfish and vain. I’d like to navigate the distinction in this blog, with full awareness that I may at times slip into embarrassing hubris. The risk seems worth it, both to flex the authority I often feel I lack, and to avoid the much greater peril than, as Tomas feared, being immortalized, misquoted, and hopelessly misunderstood in history books – to say nothing at all.